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The children had been missing for four years. One day they showed up at their parent’s front door, as if nothing had happened.

They will not speak at all.

As we enter the experimental facility I am puzzled by the presence of multiple polyglass walls defining an enclosure that extends beyond my field of vision.

I am part of a team, three other people walk in with me: a doctor, a psychologist, and a reporter. I am the artist. We will each evaluate the children, then our reporter will compile our findings and submit them to the powers that be.

We turn a corner and the kids’ enclosure comes into full view: the girl is about twelve years old, the boy eight or nine. Their glass prison is filled with toys and comfortable furniture, just like a normal living room, here awash in clinical light. There are cameras and massive banks of electronic equipment beyond the transparent walls.

I wonder what the reason is for keeping the children in a bulletproof cage.

The boy sits on the carpeted floor. His eyes are fixed on me. As I am cleared to enter the glass enclosure I recognize him.

Years back, before his disappearance, we played with crayons and paper at someone’s house, at some sort of gathering, perhaps a birthday party. We doodled and colored farmhouses, mountains, trees, cattle, flowers, birds… I remember he was perfectly articulate and extremely bright.

He stands up and goes to a corner, where he keeps a box and a big sketchpad. He takes them and walks back, sits where he was before, and looks at me again. It’s almost a command. I walk over and sit next to him. He opens the box: it is full of crayons. He then finds a blank page in the sketchpad. He does not invite me to draw with him. Instead, he picks a crayon without even looking to see what color it is, and gives me a look that can only mean: Are you paying attention?

I realize with a chill that he is about to tell me, in drawings, what happened to them during those four years.


That’s it. That’s when I woke up. My subconscious mind often weaves these mysteries and then catapults me back to daylight without an answer. It somehow feels perversely planned… I tried falling back asleep, concentrating as much as I could on the last image in the dream, but of course that would not happen. Nothing left to do but write the vision down before it faded into nothingness.


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6 Responses to “Silence”

  1. Cheryl Says:

    angel – how beautiful and poignant
    you will never know for certain
    but i bet if you closed your eyes and drew
    an answer will appear

    in most dream analysis, the boy would be you.

  2. Raul Pizarro Says:

    we will get the answer, i have melatonin. take two.

  3. Marisha Says:

    That’s actually really creative, interesting, suspenseful, and great. Now elaborate on it for a about a hundred pages, and you will have a best seller. In fact, this is the first part of the book. Keep going.

    p.s. you’re so fucking talented it makes me weep with jealousy – and i still love you!

  4. Yasmin Mushtari Says:


  5. Xuan Espinoza Cuellar Says:

    ay angel, you ate pozole before going to sleep again…

    keep doing it, pa’ next chapter

    i loved it 🙂

  6. seth Says:

    si que estas chiflado.

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